October assessment learner response

 1.When you are understanding what the question in asking, you write a detailed response using some evidence from the product.

You must read the questions carefully so you don't waste time answering the wrong question.you also need to revise all media words ( GLO words and glossary) so you can understand questions.TIMING- you must not miss out the longer, more mark questions.

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3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? If yes, make a note of it here for future revision:

Conventions means typical features.

4) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question?

Yes! Much better now you understand what the question is asking you.

5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?

Conventions means the typical features.

6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least two detailed paragraphs. 

The advert shows the place where the advert is set in a poor village.This connotes that the boy need your help because in the setting has the hottest whether that no one would survive if the consumers would help the boy because a child shouldn't die in a early age. The costume connotes that the boy doesn't have any more clothes to wear because the boy doesn't have enough money to buy anything this shows that people need necessities as well as water.Another thing the setting connotes that the background shows the walls are dirty that the village is unhygienic.This effect the audience badly because the boy is dying and this proves that people in poor villages die because of dehydration, diarrhea and malnourishment every year.

The advert shows that young children die every day because they don't have supplies to stay healthy. The water aid charity uses children in their adverts to make the consumers to give money to the charity to provide necessities to save the children lives. The setting suggest that the boy can't find fresh water they have to find dirty water that it killing the children.The water aid advert wants everyone to donate money to save everyone from dying with diarrhea,malnourishment and dehydration.